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Oddesy into 2012 : Chapter 3 : Ring of fire

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She falls and then awakens to find herself at home well what used to be her home. She sat, sat down in a place that used to be her home. She didn't know how she got there. She didn't care. "It's gone, engulfed in flames," she whispered. The place where the house had been was encircled in a ring of fire. A wind blew across her neck then something touched her shoulder. "You're at the third gate. Find the fourth to find another clue to save this all", something whispered. "W-who's there?" She could not see it yet felt its presence.
She looked down to see a skeleton. Her purple irises gleamed in the light of the embers by the skull. Between the teeth was a map slightly burnt. "Eww!" she squealed as she grabbed the map. It was burnt on the edges and also had writing on the back. The writing was in English but was hard to read. The only thing she could read was 'Sincerely, Zephyra'.
She had seen 'Zephyr' before but was it short for 'Zephyra'
Now she stared ahead. The fire was closer to her. She lay down "I'm gonna die!" She screamed as she closed her eyes. She opened her eyes to see someone, no something staring back at her "Take my hand" said the thing which was a with a buzz cut. "Jackson…" As she grabbed the thing's hand she began to float. She screamed while what she now knew was a spirit smiled. Soon she was at the end of the ring of fire. Jackson told her to jump. When she landed and turned to thank him, there wasn't anything there not even the fire.
She then began to walk. Walk to the fourth gate on the map.
here is chapter 3 entry for Oddesy into 2012. I would appreciate critiques (not to harsh)
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